Thursday, February 23, 2012

Burning Love Entry #15


Thursday Morning Greetings!

Here is our last burning love entry—unless someone sent one in that we missed—if that's the case, speak now or forever. . .

Additionally, we have one 140-word conundrum to tackle.  Then we'll mull and ponder and furrow our brows and wring our hands to come up with a winner. 

This will be agony.

But for now, we hope you enjoy this last entry—rife with beautiful imagery, introspection, and a touch of melancholy.

Beyond the porch rail, mist hangs heavy over the hills.  Familiar scenes of green meadows, leafing maple, elm, oak and evergreens trees stand hidden. Endless blue skies and white-peaked purple mountains, now veiled by weighted vapor.

I stand, looking out in despair; bereft but of memory of what once had been before me.

Was it ever there – the beauty, the peace, the completeness?  Does its absence prove its existence? The ache in my soul was not there until I looked out to see it gone.  The hollow in my heart abstract until part of it was removed.

Do the familiar, but hidden scenes draw their fullness and purpose from the emotions they evoke from me? Possibly as much as I am made absolute and human by missing them when they are gone. Either alone - a mirror without a reflection.

These words resonate within—especially on certain lonely days.

Readers?

Love,
Lisa and Maddie

11 comments:

  1. At first I thought, "this reads like it's from a novel."
    That became, "This reads like a novel."
    Then I realized, "It's a 140 word novel."
    I love it.
    And I would read this person's full length novel any time.
    I'm assuming this person knows they have a gift for writing. If not they need to. But this author had better be a professional, or soon to be professional, writer.

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  2. (I got first comment! I win! 8^)

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  3. I'm embarrassed to even compose a comment after that evoking piece.

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  4. Uncertain moments. Lonely moments.

    Memories . . .

    Beautiful.

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  5. Me too, Cat. That's some good writing there.

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  6. Breath stilling and beautiful!!

    I could not possibly choose a favorite--they were all wonderful!

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  7. I thought the contest ran all month?

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  8. Miles, the contest does run all month, but we don't have any more entries--except for one 140-word conundrum. If anyone still wants to enter (or enter again), there's still time.

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  9. Beautiful!!

    Hi! I'm a new follower of your lovely blog.
    Have a nice day!

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